too rushed

『 cofefe 』 July 30, 2016 7:09 pm

i reread the first two chapters and if u think about it, it's way different to the recent chapters. everything was too abrupt and sudden. there could've been so much more "content" it seemed unnatural

but eh, not gonna lie. im gonna keep reading it. hopefully it continues on for a little longer.
and the real romance, jealousy, etc will come

Responses
    ~YaoiLover^^ July 30, 2016 6:57 pm

    I thought so too. Like the first time they had sex it was sudden and I really didn't expect to see more until way later. Like the awkward aftermath never happened. It could've used more transition fluff.

    B July 30, 2016 7:07 pm

    What it's really missing is real love and romance. I was expecting some heart thumps and blushing moments but instead it jumped straight to sex. They really aren't much different than sex friends right now but, as you said, hopefully some actual romance comes later ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Yay panda! July 30, 2016 10:21 pm
    What it's really missing is real love and romance. I was expecting some heart thumps and blushing moments but instead it jumped straight to sex. They really aren't much different than sex friends right now but,... @B

    I agree. I was looking forward to them being confused about their feelings for each other and falling in love...which would have made the sex more satisfying. I guess this is one of those stories where the romance follows the physical stuff, which is ok too.

    ~YaoiLover^^ July 31, 2016 2:18 am
    I agree. I was looking forward to them being confused about their feelings for each other and falling in love...which would have made the sex more satisfying. I guess this is one of those stories where the roma... Yay panda!

    yea. In most yaoi I wouldn't have had much issue with rushed development. This one just had extra anticipation because it's a gender-bender (for me personally)

    Yay panda! July 31, 2016 2:35 am
    yea. In most yaoi I wouldn't have had much issue with rushed development. This one just had extra anticipation because it's a gender-bender (for me personally) ~YaoiLover^^

    Exactly! It's a big part of the fun of this genre

    ~YaoiLover^^ July 31, 2016 3:46 am
    Exactly! It's a big part of the fun of this genre Yay panda!

    Yus, see we totally get each other