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I think the story is supposed to be jumbled because the MC's memories are jumbled. When they were separated they had spells cast on them to keep them apart and I think part of that was also blocking their memories of each other.
Which is why the story is incoherent because we lack the full picture of their story.
I think the story is interesting but for quite a while I was entirely confused on what was going on. the story was to badly put together for me to understand. well at least until they filled it in somewhat. Though its still all jumbled up to me though. I to felt like the chapters were out of place or something.