It feels a little off like the flow of this and the way they speak? Does that make sense haha I do like this one but it's just... It doesn't really reel me in, I like the concept and all but I would wish they focused more on the kids
Kinda agree. It kinda jumps all over without staying on one subject. And despite the title, the story focus mainly on MC life as a retainer... more cutie pie please
It feels a little off like the flow of this and the way they speak? Does that make sense haha I do like this one but it's just... It doesn't really reel me in, I like the concept and all but I would wish they focused more on the kids