Str8 trash lol

Luvchyld July 18, 2023 8:20 pm

So I'm the only person who thinks the plot pacing, dialogue and character motives are terrible? Great concept, garbage execution

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    LunarLily August 8, 2023 10:00 am

    Ur not the only one i also think its to fast, like in the beginning of the chapters FL find his father and suddenly she accepted it….?

    Saphir August 10, 2023 5:32 pm

    You're not , the plot is so bad, the motive so bad , they not take action again tani something and they all interested on romance... suddenly he killed the king easily like the palace is his own home... What's about that curse they made ? What is about the fact that everyone knows that tani something is the bad guy but everyone just wait and let him do whatever he wants... what is about that northern powerful duke who aware that tani something is responsible of everything but not doing anything... seriously the plot is so bad... It's a great deception because it has potential

    Renツ October 5, 2023 9:50 am

    Thought so too. They rushed through a lot of stuff. Like sometimes it doesn't make sense. Good concept if they actually paced it well