I genuinely enjoyed this. I've been making art for over 25 years and my work is about on par with a lot of it. In some areas I'm better and many in worse, technically speaking. That said, their style is much more defined than mine is. I think most people were put off by monster dick but if you've read as much as I have, monster dick is just a little more exciting because it's something different.
I honestly think it's an unfair score and I truly hope that this didn't cause the artist to give up because the funny parts were absolutely hilarious and in the short time the stories lasted, the author already had me caring deeply about these characters. I'm also an author (I know I should try making manga lol) and so I can see through a lot of lesser stories. This one truly grasped my attention.
If I had the chance to talk directly to the creator (s?) of this, I'd tell them regardless of the vanilla masses, they're killing it. This is great and to keep going! Practice the areas within which you find yourself lacking and soon you'll have absolute masterpieces on your hands, not to say this isn't. Art is in the eye of the beholder and this patron beholds masterful art.
Its never the monster dick. Its more likely the story aspect. People who read talk will sit through the worst art imaginable if it has a good story to back it
Yaoi*
So I commend the artist, because the colouring is great and they have their own distinct style. I think if they just work on the side profiles of characters and maybe differentiate their facial expressions more, we'd me on the right path.
Nonetheless, well done to the artist for creating and sharing their work (๑•ㅂ•)و✧