The writing...

moody_bish July 26, 2023 3:51 pm

1. Chapter 1 doesnt tie in the next chapters well. Heck, there is no proper intro because the context is sporadic which doesnt fit well for a series that literally updates rather than released as a complete story.
2. The additional elements is so out there but the stort just kept going without much of a filler about what the mc knows. It just HAPPENS.
3. As much as i love the dynamic of the "dad" and the MC, it's just a chemistry so lost in this blizzard of information and story tropes.


And honestly, it's a babies fight...

Responses
    Alexiss July 26, 2023 5:25 pm

    I'm sorry, I meant to upvote but I mistapped ╥﹏╥