The story was so close to character development with the top, but ultimately fell short when instead of the interalized homophobia and hiding that he likes more than just women, the lesson came to him hiding things he loves and scared of being different, it falls into the same category but for this specific story more needed to be said about how he didnt want to even want asami to be a boy because of how much he didnt want to be queer. I think asami deserves someone much better, someone who despite society will still love whoever they want because they LOVE THEM! The extra didnt show any development either, its so sad that i read all that and that love still seemed conditional..
The story was so close to character development with the top, but ultimately fell short when instead of the interalized homophobia and hiding that he likes more than just women, the lesson came to him hiding things he loves and scared of being different, it falls into the same category but for this specific story more needed to be said about how he didnt want to even want asami to be a boy because of how much he didnt want to be queer. I think asami deserves someone much better, someone who despite society will still love whoever they want because they LOVE THEM! The extra didnt show any development either, its so sad that i read all that and that love still seemed conditional..