ml's too bland (writing wise). she's too good for him (her 1st life is the goat, this story with good romance or no romance >> ) he didnt support her first life enough I wish she would fall in love way more slowly and focus on goals esp since he's jus nice which I get she likes but (it lacks depth, I get they're both lonely but idk their interactions... ) ig he jus needs to hurry up and recognize her praying for good plot devices/development, no more kidnapping pls (not every male next to her needs to love her it's overdone)
ml's too bland (writing wise).
she's too good for him (her 1st life is the goat, this story with good romance or no romance >> )
he didnt support her first life enough
I wish she would fall in love way more slowly and focus on goals esp since he's jus nice which I get she likes but (it lacks depth, I get they're both lonely but idk their interactions... )
ig he jus needs to hurry up and recognize her
praying for good plot devices/development, no more kidnapping pls
(not every male next to her needs to love her it's overdone)