I've read Spoon's previous works and usually one of the big things they like to do is time skips.
However I feel like with this sort of story, it's too frequent that the storyline becomes difficult to follow.
The first couple of chapters were very well done, the children becoming close and getting to know each other. Her mom's death although was quite sudden, it was written really well from the POV of a child.
Then.. the plot becomes time skip galore. Perhaps the k-drama goes into more detail so Spoon is trying to elaborate on parts which aren't included or refined but it's done too messy. FL is studying then having a couple of jobs to getting her dream job while ML has gone states, military and has his family drama... all of those mentioned events felt too important to casually skip because it's hard to understand the characters, their motives/goals and how they are working to it.
ML especially because I feel like the beginning told his POV very strongly, it's odd that we no longer get fundamental parts that add to his perspective or childhood (like his life during military, when the relationship with his sister became damaged, himm accustoming to life away from home, how he makes friends despite his childhood and etc)
It feels like the current chapters we are getting aren't in the present yet because there's so much skipping that it's difficult to follow or explain. Maybe the story is still to recent however I wish it would at least expand on the parts it shows us since it's interesting to learn yet gets moved on so quickly by another time skip.
I don't think it's supposed to show all the events because the k- drama already does that it's probably only meant to show their childhood and some extra details/scene that wasn't included the the kdrama
Idk abt others but I liked the timeskip they didn't yk drag it on a lot and let's be honest she can't expand on a lot cause then the webtoon ch would become way too long that's why I felt that the parts she cut out were pretty good
I've read Spoon's previous works and usually one of the big things they like to do is time skips.
However I feel like with this sort of story, it's too frequent that the storyline becomes difficult to follow.
The first couple of chapters were very well done, the children becoming close and getting to know each other. Her mom's death although was quite sudden, it was written really well from the POV of a child.
Then.. the plot becomes time skip galore. Perhaps the k-drama goes into more detail so Spoon is trying to elaborate on parts which aren't included or refined but it's done too messy. FL is studying then having a couple of jobs to getting her dream job while ML has gone states, military and has his family drama... all of those mentioned events felt too important to casually skip because it's hard to understand the characters, their motives/goals and how they are working to it.
ML especially because I feel like the beginning told his POV very strongly, it's odd that we no longer get fundamental parts that add to his perspective or childhood (like his life during military, when the relationship with his sister became damaged, himm accustoming to life away from home, how he makes friends despite his childhood and etc)
It feels like the current chapters we are getting aren't in the present yet because there's so much skipping that it's difficult to follow or explain. Maybe the story is still to recent however I wish it would at least expand on the parts it shows us since it's interesting to learn yet gets moved on so quickly by another time skip.