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It annoyed me a bit too, I would recommend to read it because their ending is really cute and to me seems like they were able to finally be in a healthy relationship, so if you can manage to read through the anoying parts then it's actually a good read. I do think some parts in the beginning seemed a bit inconsistent, I would have gave them more chapters and would changed some things to make the way characters feel and so act acording to that more believable.
welp, i dropped it
i cant stand seeing so many lies and betrayals, they're not white lies, its not to protect kile, its just lou and his selfishness of keeping him unaware of everything!
(just my opinion)