You're SO RIGHT. ToT everything was going so well at the start. It feels like we were experiencing the stories and not explained to like the latter chapters. And my god, that vision vs machine is so children book story to scare kids from overusing the phones... LIKE IT WAS SUCH A COOL CONCEPT BEFORE????????
Uhhhhhh it was great before.. I wish it would have kept up the pace until the end..
TRUE! It irks me that those concept Gods weren't fleshed out more, how they told that this badass power made the ML invincible but all we got were snippets of how the power was used. He just went shoom boom teleport then bye（/TДT)/
Ikr?????? This could have been hundred chapters and it still wouldn't be boring.
omg you said everything I was thinking of!! the story had great potential but wasn't properly executed well
IT WAS GOOD, THE PACING AND EVERYTHING WAS GREAT ESPECIALLY AT THE START
WHY DID THEY HAVE TO CLICK ON FAST FORWARD STARTING FROM THE SCENE WHERE THEY EXPOSED AN NUO'S POWERS?!
Everything went downhill from there, the two alphas became baddies suddenly, although there was a hint at an earlier chapter that they were interested with Mr. Beast's proposal, the fight scene with the CEO and that water guy? He was the biggest question mark for me, like how did you became an alpha if he was weak??
And then that Machine God or whatever, he just suddenly acquired him from the mobile device?? I understood vision, coz she was from his mom, but the machine God didn't quite make sense to me? I thought they were concepts, so how did he got machine since young? Was that a magic cellphone or something?
And the MC
MC is strong yeah, and all that jazz, but dude had a kinda facial paralysis, even the ML had it. I understand that they're stoic and stuff but mann their romance was rushed too?? It was like yep you guys fell in love first sight but for MC he had palpitations with just the ML, was that enough reason to be in the "Love territory" or whatever?
But anyway all the points I stated would have been resolved if there were more chapters.
It was just rushed, and I understand, but URGH It could have been a GREAT STORY with AWESOME DEVELOPMENTS you know? Like the betrayal and the lies and the negotiations, the characters if they were more fleshed out, the past of An Nuo of why he was abandoned, everything just...fell...short. they had this amazing world building and killing all those monsters with their superpowers but they didn't have an ACTUAL skirmish aboveground with the actual threats?
But still a good read but could have been a GREAT read all I'm saying.