I have thoughts lol

rain August 23, 2023 4:48 am

1. I don't like the character development in this story. Kim Dan just seems like a sad character. I like the art ofcourse but unlike BJ Alex where the characters would just draw the reader in, this seems to miss something. I could be wrong ofc, but I can't quite connect with jaekyoung or dan or even the actor. Potato seems interesting but that's about it.

2. Mr. Joo is so handsome oml. Maybe because this chapter has more closeups of him but damn! He's hawt. The head to body ratio seems a lil weird, like the head is too small for the body and the neck but maybe because he is shown as bulky and big.

Weeelll see y'all next month!

Responses
    Angela August 23, 2023 5:04 am

    Yeah! The artstyle is so pretty but I think there’s something missing too. BJ alex characters be like “Wowwwww!! DAMNN!!! So fking hot!! OMG!!! Sheeshhhhhh!! YEAHHH!!! DADDY!!!” but Jinx be like “Woahhh…the artstyle is so pretty” & that’s it. Idk if u understand but there’s nothing left after reading this.

    rain August 23, 2023 5:20 am

    Yes! I do get what you mean. I mean compare the whole "hyung" nsfw chapter of bj alex to nsfw pool chapter here.

    Angela August 23, 2023 5:59 am

    Damn!!! Imma go read that chp again