Please no...

Eve September 11, 2023 11:48 pm

From reading the comments, I have to agree that this story is dragging this "past plot line" for way too long. I really hope that some comments are not spot on in predicting that this will last till Season 3..please no. Watching Brian and Sol is nice but why is it so long? I feel like this could've been condensed into fewer chapters. Each chapter seems pretty short and there doesn't seem to be much happening; (Chapter 67- head chief plans his two new sacrifices; chapter 68 - he introduces those two new sacrifices) Like is there a need to go so deep into the past with every detail? At the very least, the author could've structured it so that we refer to the past but then go back into the present consistently and only for plot points in the past that are relevant to Ian and Sol in the present.

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