Funny huh

VirotiNeis792 September 12, 2023 10:42 am

So this dude is upfront about his terms when dating someone, but clearly his dating history suggests none actually were able to uphold it. Kaede enters the fray and is actually someone who follows his own terms, that it gave our poor seme a crisis in which "why dis btch actually follows it?!?!", because he isnt used to dating someone who actually follows his own terms, he now fell for Kaede.... love truly works in mysterious ways

Tbh this kind setup really needed for chapters for it to be more impactful cuz were dealing with a relationship that can easily fall apart becuase of the terms this seme set... i really didnt feel it when he said he has fallen for the MC cuz the setup was just too lacking for it to actually convince me he has fallen for him

So yeah it was rushed, still a decent read, his couldve had so much more potential though

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    VirotiNeis792 September 12, 2023 10:45 am

    Corection on the 2nd paragraph .. * i really didnt feel it when he said he has fallen for Kaede