
The plot isn’t dark though, a dark plot would be something like Killing Stalking, this is far from it, it would have torture, Dan would be getting beat half to death and raped every chapter but he’s not he would be trying to escape his hellhole any chance he got to get away from his torturer but he ain’t this is not even close to dark ya just don’t like how rough jjk please grow tf up

Plain*
Stupid people say "this is too rough for you, dont read it if you dont like dark stuff coz the author said this is how it will be"
And the when dark shit reader like myself who has read torture, rape and gore see no actual plot or sense in it...they be like "you are not the target audience" like bro???? You all just making excuses at this point to defend ur bad plot. And just cant accept that you just like the romanticized rape.??????? I really wanna know why people who like this, like it.

yeah there is nothing 'dark' about this it's just a really bad excuse for the author to draw rape and dumb porn at this point. i'm not even joking some authors just barely make a passable plot that doesn't make any sense so they can get to draw their fantasies and shit which is why i stopped even caring about this story i read it if i'm free just because it's stupid and that bad that i keep wanting to read
Who is the target audience for this at this point??
People who read dark stuff for the plot?? Then where is the "dark" plot like the author promised? Where is the warnings and dark tags??? How tf do you have a romance tag but not the "dark" stuff??? I dont get it??? Like anyone who came here for the plot clearly cant understand what unique plot she is aiming for?? Anyone who reads dark stuff for the plot definitely has high expectations, like the author definitely disappointed us with that one. (Anyone who finds this story interesting genuinly tell me why? Like, seriously)
12 year old girls who just got into bl and likes hot people and cant understand what is actual sex and what is sexual abuse???? What is a good plot and what is bad??? Thats problematic.
Women who fetisize gay men??? Like aint now way. if there is not plot thats the only thing left. Gay sex dubcon. Bruh.
Or women who self insert themselves in mah boy dan to imagine getting abused by a hot gay man???
I am genuinely thinking so hard of people who would like this type of stuff and this is all.
Okay if this is targeted towards people who love to shit on trash then she got that right.
Bj alex was pretty good yk (my views on that has changed but hush) it was pretty creative. It had its weaknesses so i expected her to do better in her future works yk??? But this is what she came up with?? This is not an "i hate the author so much" but my genuine questions that i just cant find the answer to...
Seriously what dan said "he probably is suffering more"...what sane person can believe that...did the author made him this stupid on purpose?? Aint no way an adult with more than 3 braincells cant let that go...Or did the author self inserted herself in to dan to say that shit? Coz i cant believe dan is this down bad???? Demn okay now i am overthinking...
Ig gay men in the chat remain...this basically is gay porn so you all good. You all have the right to fap to it.