Whaaaaat i expected it to be at least 100 chaps... it had a promising plot :((
Agreed, I expected to read a little more about the marks as well. Or some more details about their situations complexity (AxA) and how they would work around it. I wanted to see a little more about their vision for their future in general.. I’m glad that they worked the misunderstandings out but what about the depth of their relationship?
Wait so its ending? No more seasons? Forever?!!
Omg I thought it was just me after a long rough day cuz at some parts I couldn't read right lol I was also reading in one go the last couple hours and for their thoughts and conversations, I had to scroll back and forth to reread to make sure I understand what was going on.
I think the plot was really interesting because of the main characters but man the time lines could be confusing if you don't pay attention. I also hope the author would add side stories once she takes some times to look back at the whole stories and fill the loopholes.
Abandon all hope
Chapter 58 days “THE END” the freaking end. I’m not sure the author has planned side stories but what in the actual.
I feel like the author could make some extras. But the author also has been going into a lot of hiatus. I feel the story was too complex for what the author intended. So, long story short, there’s so much lore for what the author wanted to draw. She did mention that this happened to her with her previous work. So, maybe she wasn’t intending to write something so long and complex but by the time she realized it was already too much so she decided to cut the story just in the exact moment they clear the misunderstanding with the exhibit.
Because there’s no more talk about the marks, no mention if two alphas can bond. The fact that the characters drop details about each other preferences that were never shown in any scenes. I read this all in one go last night. And when you read it like that, you realize the story has too many loopholes and is poorly filled. The art is beautiful and the plot is interesting. But it was poorly executed.