I don't know if the chapter felt short or I just want more.

Deofol October 22, 2023 1:16 am

I really liked how the story built up to the title, it was so well done! But, it didn't quite satisfy my craving for a more intense connection between the characters. A sweet, passionate kiss at the end of the chapter would've been perfect to show their growing relationship. I'm genuinely excited for them and can't wait to see the obstacles they'll tackle together.

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    IsolemRashlum October 22, 2023 4:31 pm

    You gonna see their kiss soon like more 2 chapters :D