This feels like a wattpad story with the the plot all over the place. I did not think the ...

Fujoshi-sama October 28, 2023 12:15 am

This feels like a wattpad story with the the plot all over the place. I did not think the idea was too bad but it can be better executed.

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    bloop October 28, 2023 2:02 am

    not really the plots been consistent from the start but i agree it could’ve been better it was still good though

    Fujoshi-sama October 28, 2023 4:35 am
    not really the plots been consistent from the start but i agree it could’ve been better it was still good though bloop

    Coz the build up was good at first but they are dragging it so much for many chapters. It's always a cliff hanger after another. Now that they are focusing on it, it doesn't hit that hard anymore.

    puthay eaterrr October 28, 2023 5:22 am

    not you sounding exactly like the marang dude rn

    bloop October 29, 2023 12:15 am
    not you sounding exactly like the marang dude rn puthay eaterrr

    LMAOO literally

    Fujoshi-sama October 29, 2023 2:37 am
    not you sounding exactly like the marang dude rn puthay eaterrr

    Maybe I'm him