Really? It has been over a year since the guy first started working at the club so I feel like they got close in a good amount of time and I love the side stories because I feel like they show that though they're side characters they still have their own stories. Different ppl have different opinions though so fair enough, the female characters are défo cute tho, I also hope the author makes a wlw romance.
I see your point, it definitely does make sense following the timeline of the story, it just happened in what I feel is a short amount of chapters. It’s really just my personal preference of a much slower paced romance, I suppose. And I do agree that side characters given backstory is pretty important, I guess I just didn’t like the characters enough to feel invested in their histories and so on. To each their own
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I felt it too. Like the chemistry was kinda rushed. We saw the main couple fucking and Uke falling in love. We didnt get to see seme fall in love. Seme was nonchalant most of the time but he says he loves Uke at the end so...okay.
Can we not call them seme and uke? They have names or just distinguishing features.
I can’t help but feel disappointed with how the story is progressing. It had a great start and strong premise that I really enjoyed, good dialogue, and a well-realized art style that translated really well into the story. As it goes on, the plot itself starts to feel forced. The main characters have a very (in my opinion) rushed chemistry, if that makes sense. The author attempts to make the side characters prominent by giving them backstories, despite being so successful with focusing on the main characters at the beginning. It starts to feel jumbled and lacking in direction. I feel as if the story would have been much better if it slowed down the pace of the relationship progressing, so the chemistry remained much more natural and realistic. I find it hard to believe they became so close in such a short period of time, and it feels even harder to understand because the author includes so many side stories about different characters. It has a really good premise that is kind of butchered by trying to be a ‘jack-of-all-trades’ story. I imagine it has potential to become much better, but it’s already slightly uninspired to me considering the unnatural progression and fast-paced nature of the main romance. This is just my personal opinion, and if you still like the story, that’s cool too. I do hope the author makes some yuri at some point, as an aside. Her female characters are super cute