Wasn't too fond of what went down in chapter 1. Even though Shou acknowledged what he did wrong, Kaoru let it slide too easily.
I did appreciate that he stopped himself from penetrative sex every subsequent time after that. But all of a sudden in the extras after ch4 they're having sex and lots of it. The panel with Shou saying he loves Kaoru, But then in a later panel Kaoru thinking that their relationship is still unclear- it was very confusing.
Hopefully volume 2 clears things up a bit.
Overall interesting concept and pretty art- but from a storytelling perspective it's all over the place. The pacing suddenly rushed up in the extra.
Wasn't too fond of what went down in chapter 1. Even though Shou acknowledged what he did wrong, Kaoru let it slide too easily.
I did appreciate that he stopped himself from penetrative sex every subsequent time after that.
But all of a sudden in the extras after ch4 they're having sex and lots of it.
The panel with Shou saying he loves Kaoru,
But then in a later panel Kaoru thinking that their relationship is still unclear- it was very confusing.
Hopefully volume 2 clears things up a bit.
Overall interesting concept and pretty art- but from a storytelling perspective it's all over the place. The pacing suddenly rushed up in the extra.