Dude's existence is enough to pull aggro. What is he a twelve year that got betrayed for the first time? What kind of nonsense is he spouting?? And the mage chick, "this dungeon is beneath me " Get out of here with that. The MC and his guildmaster boo seem to be the only likeable characters? bruh no, this sucks. I like the concept, and the MC's power is real cool. I hope the story improves from here.
Dude's existence is enough to pull aggro. What is he a twelve year that got betrayed for the first time? What kind of nonsense is he spouting?? And the mage chick, "this dungeon is beneath me " Get out of here with that. The MC and his guildmaster boo seem to be the only likeable characters? bruh no, this sucks. I like the concept, and the MC's power is real cool. I hope the story improves from here.