Story wise this is tacky.The pink haired bish had more POV than MC. Pacing is too fast for progress. All the other characters are just accessories to the downtrodden MC's story. She's a pushover, still covering for the pink bish.
Story wise this is tacky.
The pink haired bish had more POV than MC. Pacing is too fast for progress. All the other characters are just accessories to the downtrodden MC's story.
She's a pushover, still covering for the pink bish.