That felt like a waste of time reading. It's so... bland idk what else to say. There's no tension, the characters don't have any charisma, the ml's obsession makes no sense (i mean this like: he's possessive but doesn't do anything about it. He keeps mentioning how he wants mc to be happy in a world he curates for him but we really don't see him doing anything of the sort. This could've been an optional trait but he's not unapologetic enough about his supposed obsession. He makes no sense as a character), the writing isn't as compelling as other stories with the same plot or character dynamics (think: love jinx, opposites attract, i'll even throw the third ending here)
That felt like a waste of time reading. It's so... bland idk what else to say. There's no tension, the characters don't have any charisma, the ml's obsession makes no sense (i mean this like: he's possessive but doesn't do anything about it. He keeps mentioning how he wants mc to be happy in a world he curates for him but we really don't see him doing anything of the sort. This could've been an optional trait but he's not unapologetic enough about his supposed obsession. He makes no sense as a character), the writing isn't as compelling as other stories with the same plot or character dynamics (think: love jinx, opposites attract, i'll even throw the third ending here)