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vermotaa December 7, 2023 10:18 am

I love this story sm
I like the characters, idk I just really like it
But it's kinda annoying me
Doing chapters on backstory is one thing, but, all the unnecessary sex scenes are taking away from the plot
Why are we spending so much time on past sex when we could be looking at the future ones pookie

Responses
    Menmyself December 7, 2023 4:04 pm

    It’s a smut story sweetheart, people who read this because of the smut would complain like u if they didnt get enough spicy scenes when it’s obv a smut story

    vermotaa December 7, 2023 11:44 pm
    It’s a smut story sweetheart, people who read this because of the smut would complain like u if they didnt get enough spicy scenes when it’s obv a smut story Menmyself

    "Why are we spending so much time on past sex when we could be looking at the future ones pookie"
    The second half of my comment darlin'
    I love smut, I just want it to be in the present lmao

    Menmyself December 8, 2023 1:27 am
    "Why are we spending so much time on past sex when we could be looking at the future ones pookie"The second half of my comment darlin'I love smut, I just want it to be in the present lmao vermotaa

    Again, because it’s a smut

    vermotaa December 8, 2023 3:27 am
    Again, because it’s a smut Menmyself

    Bruh
    All I'm saying is I want it to be back in the present
    Why do u care sm lol
    It being smut has nothing to do with it
    It's just that there's no point to these scenes rn, I'd rather see him smashin in the present where it matters
    I've never liked back stories dragging on, regardless of the genre

    Menmyself December 8, 2023 6:31 am
    BruhAll I'm saying is I want it to be back in the present Why do u care sm lolIt being smut has nothing to do with itIt's just that there's no point to these scenes rn, I'd rather see him smashin in the present... vermotaa

    Uh…why so pressed i’m just replying to ur comment??? Everyone can agree and disagree on this comment section

    vermotaa December 8, 2023 2:40 pm
    Uh…why so pressed i’m just replying to ur comment??? Everyone can agree and disagree on this comment section Menmyself

    You absolutely can
    To be fair, you started the first msg calling me "sweetheart" and that's what my dad says when he is being condescending to me in an argument so I immediately read it that way and got defensive.
    Even if you weren't meaning to sound condescending, that's the way I have been reading your messages