I wish the sex was more consensual and less ultimatum. But the story was rather interesting. I wish it were longer, but I appreciate a short story too. Some stories are so drawn out, that it's like "get to the fuckin point," and it's a point we all could see a world away. But this was as an overall good story. Bad guy was smart to not tell the guy that he killed the kids parents, he'd have died too.
I wish the sex was more consensual and less ultimatum.
But the story was rather interesting.
I wish it were longer, but I appreciate a short story too.
Some stories are so drawn out, that it's like "get to the fuckin point," and it's a point we all could see a world away.
But this was as an overall good story.
Bad guy was smart to not tell the guy that he killed the kids parents, he'd have died too.