Dawg this thing is paced like the avg 6 chapter BL when it should be paced like a 50-60 chapter manga.
Like omg 5 conflicts happen in one chapter and are resolved in the same.
More chapters of the guys walls being slowly torn down as he falls for the smiley dude would have been perfect. More chapters of smiley dude's grief of when he lost his mother. Jusr overall it needs better pacing its insane.
Because tbh this is an adorable concept but is being shot with the pacing.
(also this story is giving major isekai/fantasy/royalty manwha where the girl is this cherry marry sue like person)
Dawg this thing is paced like the avg 6 chapter BL when it should be paced like a 50-60 chapter manga.
Like omg 5 conflicts happen in one chapter and are resolved in the same.
More chapters of the guys walls being slowly torn down as he falls for the smiley dude would have been perfect. More chapters of smiley dude's grief of when he lost his mother. Jusr overall it needs better pacing its insane.
Because tbh this is an adorable concept but is being shot with the pacing.
(also this story is giving major isekai/fantasy/royalty manwha where the girl is this cherry marry sue like person)