A cold cigarette to ease the pain.

The fool December 31, 2023 8:18 am

I genuinely am getting pissed off with Karl’s inner monologues. It literally hogs panels for NO REASON.

Ash asking If it’s too much and Karl going: “Is it too much? No, it isn’t too much.” In his MIND actually pissed me OFF LMAOO. WHY—WHY DID WE HAVE TO READ THAT?!??? That took up TWO PANELS?? And sometimes he just repeats himself, especially when he does stuff like: “This is my first time...” I could get drunk by the amount of times he says that—the amount of times he’s THOUGHT about it actually. It’s just driving me crazy. Because a chapter could just be panels upon panels of a character asking/telling Karl something and him going on this long inner monologue just to verbally say “No/Yes/Not really.” Like we could have just been SHOWN his response. Man I don’t know. I might just be nitpicky, but I’m starting to believe that’s why we’re always just left with these cliffhangers that USUALLY ALWAYS END WITH ASH SAYING/QUESTIONING SOMETHING. It’s becoming redundant.

Responses
    NOT SORA !!! December 31, 2023 9:29 am

    well when hes getting fucked silly and drowning in pleasure i don't think he'd have much vocal capacity to speak over all those slutty moans..

    jyugos_nō1stan January 1, 2024 5:28 am

    I've notices that too, im glad im not the only one pointing that out.
    the least they could do is let him say all that to Ash VOCALLY. that would have been cute ig.

    jyugos_nō1stan January 1, 2024 5:29 am
    well when hes getting fucked silly and drowning in pleasure i don't think he'd have much vocal capacity to speak over all those slutty moans.. NOT SORA !!!

    I'm pretty sure they are talking about the times when they are NOT fucking. amd just talking.

    The fool January 2, 2024 7:01 am
    I'm pretty sure they are talking about the times when they are NOT fucking. amd just talking. jyugos_nō1stan

    YES! Exactly what I was talking about! I beg that I can’t be the only one that found it a prevalent problem. You seriously can’t look me in my face and think Karlyle’s inner monologues AREN’T panel hogging. Even in the context of sex scenes, us having to read this dumb inner “turmoil” of him thinking “is this too much?!” “No. It isn’t too much” is an absolute joke of a panel.

    jyugos_nō1stan January 2, 2024 6:04 pm
    YES! Exactly what I was talking about! I beg that I can’t be the only one that found it a prevalent problem. You seriously can’t look me in my face and think Karlyle’s inner monologues AREN’T panel hogg... The fool

    you're so real omg. I've always thought the same about the story recently.
    Somehow anyone who says anything like this here gets huge amounts of dislikes and is automatically branded as a hater.
    but I'm DEFINITELY NOT hating nor am I saying
    that I dislike the entire story. It's just valid points being made about very obvious things in the manhwa.(´・ω・)

    The fool January 2, 2024 10:17 pm
    you're so real omg. I've always thought the same about the story recently.Somehow anyone who says anything like this here gets huge amounts of dislikes and is automatically branded as a hater.but I'm DEFINITELY... jyugos_nō1stan

    You get it! I also don’t understand how people downvote others that point it out when it’s blatantly obvious. I really enjoy reading this manhwa, but the pacing and Karl’s thoughts are becoming redundant and laughable!