Responses
I think the story isn't that well planned. It's kinda boring but I really like how things are escalating in this chapter. I still think author is gonna disappoint and they're not setting the characters well for this plot. But the art is okay, I like the mundane school setting and I like reading this when my faves aren't updating lol. The reverse harem is bound to make me drop this tho. Like nah, you're too old to be moved by this teenage love.
This story is a good example of how making a story too fast paced can be detrimental to the plot.
How I would’ve went about it is, introduce the MC and show that she’s been abused and how she’s trying to break free. It’s not like she had friends in her previous life from what we saw, so her buddying up with her roommates so quickly was odd to me. The author could’ve made a little tension upon them first meeting especially with her unique hair color. Her roommates are hesitant to get to know her. Not mean but hesitant. Maybe the MC sticks up for the commoner girl because she understands what it’s like to be outcasted. Boom, they see that she’s an alright person and start to form a friendship.
I always hate that the guy that I want to be the ML is never the ML. I know authors do this shit on purpose because shaggy brown haired guy would’ve been *chefs kiss*.
The author is making everything fast paced EXCEPT for the MCs personality. MC is not interesting. She’s strong but no one really knows that. Like someone else mentioned, being humble can come off as insincerity. I’m annoyed at her hiding her powers. One of the tropes I hate. “I can’t let anyone know how skilled or strong I am so I stay out of the spotlight.” And then something happens where they’re forced to show their skills and now EVERYONE and they mama knows how strong they are now. Doing all that hiding just to have your powers exposed in an anticlimactic scene. Okay. I’m done.