The whole story has jumped around so much that it’s hard to keep up with or even bear to read anymore. This story needed a lot more work than what was put into it. For example Yawhi’s character development was just him realizing it’s not okay to be a jackass. Another thing I’m thinking about is what was the point in bringing in Cain if he was just gonna be written off at the end. The title also feels ironic since in the end jooin just tells everyone to fuck off.
The whole story has jumped around so much that it’s hard to keep up with or even bear to read anymore. This story needed a lot more work than what was put into it.
For example Yawhi’s character development was just him realizing it’s not okay to be a jackass.
Another thing I’m thinking about is what was the point in bringing in Cain if he was just gonna be written off at the end.
The title also feels ironic since in the end jooin just tells everyone to fuck off.