It reads as if author had some non con fetish.
I guess they tried to go for difficult story, but they aren't just that good of a storyteller and it fells flat and rape instead of dark psychological thriller.
Ask them , it's yaoi what do you expect for some reason there is never a yaoi where rape is not involved
There are plenty that don't involve rape, what are you talking about?
And many of those which do involve rape at least pretend to have good story and writing, because there is a big difference between rape being part of the plot and this story, whatever it is. I can't even call it gratuitous PWP, because the sex scene are frankly unpleasant to read and these dick look like angry sausages.
Fr, the dudes look so constipated during sex. It's kinda unsettling.
Yeah, there's nothing erotic about those scenes, it's literally arse up, angry sausage in, rinse and repeat every chapter.
I know everybody says good story should show, not tell, but dammit, sometimes less is really more lmao
Why are you guys reading this just to complain?!?
| AWinterWonderLand January 30, 2024 4:30 am
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| Why are you guys reading this just to complain?!?
Why shouldn't we? Are the bad literature police or something? Why do you care?
It's not your place to police how we entertain ourselves or the comment section.
If you think that way you ain't a yaoi fan -_-
You said plenty but some people think it's not rape but it is , like forcing s3g is rape don't say it's not and that's not all there are a lot and if you think the di€k look like angry sausages them it's only in your eyes anddddd if kept complaining about this in yaoi just stop reading
I care because it's annoying.
Ppl COMPLAINING and JUDGING is annoying.
Girst, which are you to decide if I'm fan of something or not? Your mileage may vary, but what does my status as a fan ha sto do with my opinion on quality of body of literary work?
You're changing goalposts. First it was rape, now it's dubcon, what's next? And by plenty with no rape, I literally meant plenty with no rape feel good stories about pure love. I didn't mention dubcon, which by the way is not rape, otherwise it wouldn't be it's own category. I think you should venture outside your box and read other things if you think that majority of stories have rape.
Yeah, I think the dicks look like angry sausages, to me was implied, that's what we call an opinion, it is by definition what somebody thinks. But if you like dick that look like angry sausages, you do you, but I really wouldn't want to know about your fetishes.
Why should I stop reading tho? Because enough don't like that I have an opinion that's different to yours? Who do you think you are to police my literally ventures and commenting habits? If you don't like my comments then ignore them instead of replying. Will be easier.
I will tell you a secret tho. Do you know why I still comment? Because this story is bad and I enjoy reading people roasting it. So I assume there are other people like me. I comment, because I have fun, both with the story and comment section and it doesn't change the fact, that this story is shite. And if you think people here are bad, you should venture into Korean comments. Tapdancing Jesus on a stick, those people have no chill. But I don't see you policing them to shut up.
I for one gave it a try because I thought it was gonna be good cuz it's from the same author as "Bye Bye" and that story was nice and cute. Didn't know it was actually shit lmao. Baited and blurting out my frustrations. Don't worry, I won't read thus fuckass story again <3
Yeah, it's tough to know what you're getting into sometimes but most stories have tags and people who have read and done a review based on the available chapters. I had not expected much except was taken by surprise at the difference. But as I went on I found out (via mang*updates) and other comments saying that the author for ByeBye is done by Sorim, while this one is the artist's original work. So there may have been some sort of "expectations" going in not knowing the two works are by different authors. Although, tbf the artist had done The Housekeeper's Load and I got the sense it is "healthier" as well. But I don't go in with too much expectations. But I don't cry and malign the story or the characters. I just read it, dissect it. And move on.
But a lot of ppl here just hate read and calling the work trash and stuff. And still read it too, week after week. As diligent as doing homework. ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ (⌒▽⌒)
bc they aren’t actually good at writing
This chapter was just straight up rape..... like wtf is wrong with these fuckass authors