
Idk what your talking about I live like bro to and I hate seeing people become weak after and stuff besides the story itself is rather emberassing it's good but hey it's pretty embrassing am not saying that the mc didn't go through alot I did to alot of things and hey look at me but in general I just hate these type of stories where the bottoms are like this am not saying am not considerate but it looks like it was made from a inexperienced from love minors Wattpad story or smth

you have a point I won't argue with that but just saying, not all stories start with the kind of intro you want. You can't just go and say this and that. what are you after? hoping for it to change? THE AUTHOR wants it that way don't you think you have the right to say smth. If the author is a child FOR YOU then go believe he is a child somehow comments like yours affect the "point view" of other readers, they read for a reason and that reason is non of your concern, everyone's perspective is different that's why SOMEONE will argue with you or SOMEONE will ally with you but I don't ally I'm here to read, you're here to say things.
A think and actual tear dropped reading what is this it's like a soft fragile femboy with a strong dominant agressive top where they go "what is it bunny.."
*He said in his rough alpha male voice