I get the story line and honestly, it makes sense. The story just fell super flat for me. FL is just a dumbed down Mary Sue who has a super op power but "chooses not to use it" (btw she totes could have stopped all those troops). And ML was just dull. The story was both developed and not developed.
This story feels like a crepe with no creme and no fillings (ᇂ_ᇂ |||)
I get the story line and honestly, it makes sense. The story just fell super flat for me. FL is just a dumbed down Mary Sue who has a super op power but "chooses not to use it" (btw she totes could have stopped all those troops). And ML was just dull. The story was both developed and not developed.
This story feels like a crepe with no creme and no fillings (ᇂ_ᇂ |||)