
My friend, comrade in arms, I do not want to be crucified on the Internet this day.
-But I must say, one of my opinions is that the story as a whole is a poorly written concept, but it's not all bad. For a rape fantasy, this isn't the worst out there and if this was BL, (y'all forgive me for assuming), the vast majority of people on this site would have less of a problem with this story.
Rape and confinement are not something that should be shown as being positive or "feeling good" in the first few chapters of a story- but if given time and a natural flow, it could. A person could brainwash themselves into thinking pain feels good, it's trauma dodging. It is plausible.
It's the flow of the story that's really the problem, it's not just a rape fantasy, it's a terribly written rape fantasy that's only made for the sake of being a story about exactly what it is. It is just a story, and we are definitely taking it way too seriously. ╥﹏╥
I read this with my two eyeballs and I have to say, it was crazy. I have many opinions that I will keep to myself because I'm not here to be devil's advocate.
I've seen worse shit in this site, but still.
I would like to direct everyone who read this to the Church of Baby animals to cleanse their souls and heal their bodies.