Hmm

Can I at least hear why its bad? Cuz I honestly can't see how and why ╮(￣▽￣)╭

I'm not trying to go after u, I'm just curious

I kinda agree in the sense that it's trying to do too much all at once. Like all the cliched plot points they can possibly fit without showing actual character growth or change, and if they do have that, we can't enjoy it bc we are already onto the next point of conflict.

That’s exactly. It feels like everything is being rushed in.

Sorry never noticed you replied but I just felt like everything was being rushed and all the development just happened like it didn’t build up is what I mean.

While i agree with you, i would think it’s way worse than that ?

I think it’s easy to forget the bunny girl is one 18. She’s a teenager. It’s easy to get swayed by feeling. Her crush for the nice fox is in that vibe.

i could mention unstable teen hormones, but these are often forgotten by authors (or dubiously used which is no better)

In any cases, feelings are not controlled by thoughts or willpower, and maybe, it feels disconcerting that the narrative may imply something along these line, lots of talk and thoughts are getting in the middle of natural flaw of a relationship

It could have gone slow burn with the dragon because they actually seem to work together. I would even think, they might have actually had chemistry, but no sparkle
It could have been fine BUT
The involvement of the family makes it an ugly mess
I wanted to kick the dragon boy so bad. It’s good they realized but it broke the sweet thing and started the brain thing
On top of that
Both mothers suck so bad, when father rabbit appeared, it also felt impossible that he would let his wife do that to his daughter
The characters don’t have any consistency

The latest development pushed it even further in a bad direction. I hate the fact that the girl outspoken rabbit would hide the dragon mother first intervention : she’s too straightforward to do so ?
and that she would easily call her for help, without seeking anyone advice : what kind of a loner is she ?
This is so incongruent, not to mention it sucks so bad

Her being 18 also makes the whole baby talk feel even more toxic, than it would be by itself - adding teen pregnancy to brooding mare simply makes me want to throw it away