No just no with the next chapter

Kuroitenshi17 March 4, 2024 2:57 pm

More smut and of course not exactly more plot development it’s now pushing a second ML WHO HAS NO CHANCE IN HELL UNLESS HE MURDERS THE DOMINANT ALPHA TO BREAK THE BOND because I don’t see him asking the Mc to get to e surgery considering all the risks. If you are such a good friend stay a good friend why the hell you coming out of the wood work 5 years later . You know your best friend is bonded and you had 5 years to try and make a move. The Author continuing to diverge from the main plot with the MC and ML and give us a stupid impossible best friend love is still a major eye roll.

Instead of calling the best friend the MC needs to “ovary up” and communicate seriously with the ML. If you are so stressed out it’s giving you Gastritis you need to let the ML know and start figuring your shit out between the two of you

What I can already see happening next two chapters. the ML surprises the MC who is conversing w it his best friend- gets jealous and Tadah more jealousy sec smut chapter as well 0.0 eye roll


Don’t get me wrong I like this story I just really need more plot.

Responses
    Potato March 4, 2024 7:47 pm

    Same thing I’ve been complaining about for the past couple of weeks and is also an issue I see with other stories this author or artist (dunno which) has worked on Bye Bye had potential to be a good story about recovering from past trauma and discovering new love but the ridiculous amount of smut didn’t leave enough chapters to really dive into characters