Responses
Lol the sex looked like a fight. Made me cringe but damn the anatomy drawing was nice. Sometimes, I read stuff like this not with a horny mind but a critical eye. I appreciate bodies drawn in a way that looks like it has weight. It's nice to look at really.
The art is nice, I do appreciate how both look skinny with clothes but buff without their shirts plus the “gills” on the ribs. I too also like to focus on the art which I feel guilty criticizing it……I feel like a wealthy art owner that can’t draw giving out unwanted advice (￣∇￣")
If you hate both the main and the side story, I understand BUT if you only had the side but like/love the main story……the main story is literally about the seme obsession with the uke. He forced his feelings onto the uke and tried to assault him a few times. Idk why y’all expect the side story to be all rainbows….