Exactly. we know nothing about anyone. how should we stay intrested? This is very shalow and doesn't let us be intrigued by the plot. I don't think it's a translation type of thing. it's more of an author type of thing.
That’s weird for me. It wasn’t even the substance because even I agree with you even if they fix the translations in the type of it still not gonna be that good it reads like you’re lucid, dreaming in a really bad way less of a fever dream more of psychotic episode, I enjoyed it but at the same time I was extremely disappointed as well. It felt like they had the plot to go there. They could go there, but every time they were getting close it just randomly stops and goes absolutely fucking nowhere like the substance the potential 1000% I can see it , but I do agree. It’s a fault of the author because it goes nowhere they don’t follow through. I think the author is trying to find the fine line between two serious when it comes to making this type of fantasy story, adding enough pornographic essence to it without making it overly serious and making them too evil but also we’re trying to keep the fantasy very very loose when it came to the story and because of that they wanted to make a fever dream but it doesn’t feel proper. There’s a way to do it there’s multiple ways, but this did not accomplish it. It’s just like you make characters in your your head. You have multiple thoughts about the story that you want to make but nothing fucking connects, so it never gets to become a story.
I am a sucker for an unusual story, and unique visuals, but I’m disappointed by this one. I’m not sure if it’s the translation or if it’s a failure on the authors part but there’s a clear lack of substance with this story. Things happen for the sake of happening and it doesn’t feel like there’s any real method behind what we’re seeing. I also think some of the art choices in the story also aren’t great, the style is gorg is more just how the author choose to protray some things. Again it sucks because I feel like there was a foundation for something great but yeah. The story telling is so weak it makes it hard to sit through