These chapters must so undeveloped…

BTSFangirl25 March 14, 2024 3:40 pm

Is is money? Is that why the chapters have such little development and are short like this? When I say short, I’ve read so many stories that are short BUT they do not lack in SOME development. I wonder how long the entire story will be at this point. This is a loop and I’m wondering how long it’ll take for Dan to find his balls and realize he can be nice and not be a punching bag. Geez other uke have at least given some pushback at this point lol and Dan won’t even do the bare minimum. Also, I’m sure potato will say something later but his first priority while JK was on a rampage is to take care of his needs and wait until he’s calmer.

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    SmuttyE March 14, 2024 3:51 pm

    i heard someone say that it will be 100+ chapters so jk has a looooong way to go. but yeah i understand u, we are at 50 chapter but we know NOTHING about WHY jk is such a asshole

    trivialoves March 14, 2024 4:06 pm

    i have the same feeling, the chapters feel so SHORT to the point nothing ever really truly HAPPENS, it's like they are divided in half but published as a whole chapter, it really doesn't have a nice flow

    BTSFangirl25 March 14, 2024 5:34 pm
    i heard someone say that it will be 100+ chapters so jk has a looooong way to go. but yeah i understand u, we are at 50 chapter but we know NOTHING about WHY jk is such a asshole SmuttyE

    Noooo don’t make me faint lmao there’s no way I can get through 80+ chapters of this unless we start getting development after this chapter. The only thing making me read is the hope for it lol or just to see JK get punished. I’d like to read for the development *slouches in chair* . Guess is he was bullied by the guy. It should be a bigger hint though. We’re STILL guessing….