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Agree, the translation is good enough. It just needs a proofreader to fix the grammar.
They should try reading those translated by lalamanga, zinchanmanga etc. to see what a bad translation combined with horrendous grammar looks like lol.
The translation isn't even that but, it's just the grammar that's bad. I've read worse. This just has mistakes someone who isn't good at English would make. Tense, use of plural vs singular etc. It could've easily been proofread by someone who knows what they are doing before putting it here. Even just copy pasting it to some basic grammar check sites would've sloved the problem.