hmm

Zeph March 20, 2024 7:35 pm

The art is cool and a nice 10/10, I like this art style but the story is just so meh. Instead of making him an absolute asshole you could’ve just made him a bit mean and throughout the story do a few flash backs so we at least understand what made him like “meh”. And kim dan personality is just annoying. I understand what you’ve been through but that should’ve toughened you up bro. I wish he was more like “fine if you don’t need my help you won’t get it“ or “I got you a gift because I was trying to be nice to you but since you don’t like it so much I’ll just keep it for myself

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    Lillly7442 March 20, 2024 8:07 pm

    bruh i just looked it up, at 50 chapters, there was literally a confession and he already realized that he love him (bruuuh) and that was THE FIRST YEAR ANNIVERSAY mingwa is giving us nothing here

    Zeph March 20, 2024 10:22 pm
    bruh i just looked it up, at 50 chapters, there was literally a confession and he already realized that he love him (bruuuh) and that was THE FIRST YEAR ANNIVERSAY mingwa is giving us nothing here Lillly7442

    HELP WHAT. WELP….

    Emera March 21, 2024 9:29 am

    I pray the story ends up that route. Dan you better make him WORK