i am going to just say it. Mingwa is so bad at story telling. The art is top notch, no dou...

SmuttyE March 23, 2024 3:58 pm

i am going to just say it. Mingwa is so bad at story telling. The art is top notch, no doubt, but there hasnt been any improvement in the writing part since BJ alex. This chapter felt super underwhelming. A TIE? fr? either lose or win in a situation like this because a tie just doesnt cut it.

and this could have been done 20 chapters ago, i feel like this story is draggin out for too long without any light to be seen. im not even gonna talk about jaekyung because it's just wasting my time

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    Elihinata March 23, 2024 4:00 pm

    Agree ( ̄へ ̄)at thins point I’m almost sure they’re relying on rage baiting and people going googoogaga over any muscly handsome trash to keep this going

    delulumiko March 23, 2024 4:05 pm

    real, the chapters are super short and we have to wait for 10 days !!

    SmuttyE March 23, 2024 5:10 pm
    Agree ( ̄へ ̄)at thins point I’m almost sure they’re relying on rage baiting and people going googoogaga over any muscly handsome trash to keep this going Elihinata

    yes she is completely milking the audience at this point just because jaekyung has a handsome face. but i dont see any signs of him being slightly redeemable which is the ultimate goal afterall

    SmuttyE March 23, 2024 5:11 pm
    real, the chapters are super short and we have to wait for 10 days !! delulumiko

    it's what i have noticed with all manhwas lately, short chapters, long waiting and then frequent hiatus

    Sagobaba March 23, 2024 5:20 pm

    Just because you are impatient and not happy with the story, doesn't mean that Mingwa is a bad writer. I actually think that she is doing a really good job with the story. She is very clever with the details and also the hints about Jaekyung throughout the story. So, even though we barely know anything about him, we know plenty about him at the same time, just because of his facial expressions and the way he talks and his reactions to certain situations etc...
    It's really interesting actually.

    But yeah, I can agree that the chapters are a little too short. I feel like she could fit a little bit more stuff into each chapter. But I don't know how all that works. Maybe she doesn't have enough time for that or something.

    Elihinata March 23, 2024 5:54 pm
    yes she is completely milking the audience at this point just because jaekyung has a handsome face. but i dont see any signs of him being slightly redeemable which is the ultimate goal afterall SmuttyE

    The only nice thing he's done is visiting the grandmother but the balance is super off ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    SmuttyE March 23, 2024 7:29 pm
    Just because you are impatient and not happy with the story, doesn't mean that Mingwa is a bad writer. I actually think that she is doing a really good job with the story. She is very clever with the details a... Sagobaba

    It's not just me. I bet you plenty of people agree with me on this- that she is such a typical writer. This is such a typical storytelling. I am not impatient. I have read stories of 200 chapters and i wasnt ever bored. This though, is full of unnecessary fillers. And im not reading her work just now, ive been there since bj alex- i know how it goes. It's exactly going like bj alex with just better art and dragged out story

    Jaekyung's "expressions" alone doesnt do anything to the story and as i said, it's dragged till 50 chapters totally unnecessary. This could have been done 20 or 10 chapters ago

    Sagobaba March 23, 2024 8:05 pm
    It's not just me. I bet you plenty of people agree with me on this- that she is such a typical writer. This is such a typical storytelling. I am not impatient. I have read stories of 200 chapters and i wasnt ev... SmuttyE

    Okay. But all these elements are important to the story. The story would suck if it was rushed and if everything was fixed right away.

    And I think the story only feels dragged because it's been cut into short chapters with a long time to wait between each chapter. Because of that, there are many chapters about the same thing during a long period of time. So, it isn't really any problem with the story itself. It's the length of every chapter and when they are published that is the problem. If the chapters were longer, and/or were published in a quicker pace, then we wouldn't have that problem. But it is what it is.

    But yeah, you have your opinion and I have mine, and that's okay.