Good!

The official translation is so much better than the non official of the same chapter, I could finish the chapter.
I still think that the manga artist never saw a real tululu because it looks like a leg ha ha ha, but if it’s her thing why not :).
Dirty talk in a novel is very erotic, because as a reader, you can imagine what you want around it, but in a comic you really have to find the fragile tension point :not too much, but not too few. Here it looks like the artist had a text and she just draw the text without adapting it for a visual moment, thus it makes it awkward and a turn of. Although I know it is also very hard to draw silence.
I’ll wait for the next official chapters to read how the story develops so far!