I think the story could've flesh out the black hair guys stalking behaviour to make it more creepy. Also, mc isn't necessarily weak since he did fight back (I stopped at chp 8) despite losing since the tops build like a goddamn doritos chips.
Might continue reading this again if I'm bored. But for now, maybe bcs the stalker was heavily implied/revealed too soon that it was the black hair guy it kinda make the stalking less creepy and unnerving. I still don't find the hook of this story so far ngl
I think the story could've flesh out the black hair guys stalking behaviour to make it more creepy. Also, mc isn't necessarily weak since he did fight back (I stopped at chp 8) despite losing since the tops build like a goddamn doritos chips.
Might continue reading this again if I'm bored. But for now, maybe bcs the stalker was heavily implied/revealed too soon that it was the black hair guy it kinda make the stalking less creepy and unnerving. I still don't find the hook of this story so far ngl
Mc reminds me of that girl from diabolic lovers