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no cus they couldve made him a bit complex with seriously wanting to defeat her in terms of power, make them constantly competing with each other. itd gives the tired MC some spark to enjoy this life she didnt want, it also gives the ML some edge and motivation, and it gives them both an avenue to foster chemistry. instead they made him an errand boy with no personality outside of that. hes okay, he just lacks character
this is good except the fact that the black hair guy/disciple of fl/swordmaster is highly possible the ml or end game of her, especially that Black hair guy doesn't even exist in the novel. tbh. I can't like him as ml. he always got overpowered by the mc when they talk and the only thing he good as being obedient like a puppy coz he's based as puppy type. i can't feel any spark between them except one sidedly feeling that blooming in the hearts of blackie. honestly I'll rather want the mc not having a male partner than choose blackie just like how fl doesn't see the crown prince as romantically because he was too young for her. she have mature mind that she can't take relationship but sadly it feels like he'll choose the disciple in the end.
the story was interesting and fl reaction was the best. i like the art too, so pleasing to my eye..the fight between older child vs youngest child and how the youngest always win is so relatable. i also like the interaction of crown Prince and fl. it so funny for me when they interact with each other. i wish they put much effort for the black hair dude "he's a puppy based person, for me that guy only have handsome face, personality is so-so for me not likeable. super obedient 100%, overprotective and can be somewhat clingly, a submissive person" is so upsetting..
i want the ml to have the same vibes like her. like ml can talk back with her instead of an obedient talker. black hair guy is too weak in their interaction that im getting bored when they do interaction. the spirit is more of a mood than him. hoping that he's not the ml but sadly it 99% possible ..well ill drop this for now for stacking chapter and to lessen my annoyance with that puppy dude guy