author dragged the story on for too long. the time skip was too much and keane and onyx are still in some weird ass conflict because they’re not mature ☠ i was really trying to forgive the process of this story bc i just made up the excuse that the author wanted the plot to be realistic and not cliche, but atp it’s just stupid idk and now keane and onyx’s tension can’t be fixed in just one chapter, the author just dug a deeper hole for themselves..
author dragged the story on for too long. the time skip was too much and keane and onyx are still in some weird ass conflict because they’re not mature ☠ i was really trying to forgive the process of this story bc i just made up the excuse that the author wanted the plot to be realistic and not cliche, but atp it’s just stupid idk and now keane and onyx’s tension can’t be fixed in just one chapter, the author just dug a deeper hole for themselves..