The composition of the story itself is very choppy and has some harsh time skips. It felt like a lot was cut out and it wasn't adjusted to flow properly. So while I kind of liked the story itself I think, if it's the way the original is, that the author could have added more filler parts to make it less choppy. If it's not the original full story, the uploader missed a lot when posting here. It makes the read a little irritating because it reminds me of when a few pages don't load sometimes and you have to refresh like 3 times to get all the pages and panels for the chapter. But regardless, this has the potential to be a good story about personal growth and progress between the two. The composition just kind of ruinsil it for me tbh. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
The composition of the story itself is very choppy and has some harsh time skips. It felt like a lot was cut out and it wasn't adjusted to flow properly. So while I kind of liked the story itself I think, if it's the way the original is, that the author could have added more filler parts to make it less choppy. If it's not the original full story, the uploader missed a lot when posting here. It makes the read a little irritating because it reminds me of when a few pages don't load sometimes and you have to refresh like 3 times to get all the pages and panels for the chapter. But regardless, this has the potential to be a good story about personal growth and progress between the two. The composition just kind of ruinsil it for me tbh. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍