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Totally agree I can't take more than chapter 8 the English is messed up and the story is not taking shape, I know it's early but if there is no interest how can anyone go on like this.
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Totally agree I can't take more than chapter 8 the English is messed up and the story is not taking shape, I know it's early but if there is no interest how can anyone go on like this.
Writing this so I would not do another mistake and waste time reading this. I stopped at ch6 was not even able to go halfway. She doesn't even have a plan? As if acting crazy will make her love safe. Naah