Honestly the premise itself is not the worst thing ever(as in theres worse) but the execution is just so bad. The narrative ends up not making any sense and just creating a bunch of unanswered questions. I know this should be treated as pwp but the author clearly tried inserting some symbolisms trying to make it have some deeper meaning, which they failed at spectacularly
Honestly the premise itself is not the worst thing ever(as in theres worse) but the execution is just so bad. The narrative ends up not making any sense and just creating a bunch of unanswered questions. I know this should be treated as pwp but the author clearly tried inserting some symbolisms trying to make it have some deeper meaning, which they failed at spectacularly