I'm sure I'm the only one, but I just didn't care for this. I would have liked a more complex story. This is smut for smut's sake, not that that's bad, haha... I just saw an opportunity for a story I might like.. where he stays a beta.. He could either be reborn and doesn't go through with the marriage and his ex doesn't allow omega's to be brought in and end up with his beta... OR..He's not reborn, he divorces the husband and finds a beta who loves him.. or any other more interesting story.. to me, :)
I'm sure I'm the only one, but I just didn't care for this. I would have liked a more complex story. This is smut for smut's sake, not that that's bad, haha... I just saw an opportunity for a story I might like.. where he stays a beta.. He could either be reborn and doesn't go through with the marriage and his ex doesn't allow omega's to be brought in and end up with his beta... OR..He's not reborn, he divorces the husband and finds a beta who loves him.. or any other more interesting story.. to me, :)