Are you kidding me? It’s finished? ~{{Pacing?}}~ • It wasn’t milked, it wasn’t d...

Chinchn May 26, 2024 10:41 am

Are you kidding me? It’s finished?


~{{Pacing?}}~
• It wasn’t milked, it wasn’t digging for more view(view=money)
>>10/10

~{{Love story?}}~
• Mature (not the spicy kind of mature), too peaceful to be realistic but still is, no second ML, no heartache, no jealousy.
>>10/10

~{{Back stories of the MCs?}}~
• Did no expect fl’s origin, did not expect the adoptive father’s origin, did not expect ml’s back story—it was new for me, his behaviour is so realistic due to his experience—, did not expect Tarsi’s backstory.
>>10/10

~{{Revenge?}}~
• Revenge wasn’t forgotten, this wasn’t even a revenge story but it was well delivered [Tarsi couldn’t even breathe], all the scum known in the story got punished
10/10


I don’t know about y’all, but this is a very satisfying and a very good story.

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